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Crunch: Write about a scar
He was waiting in a chair at the DMV. He was number D-206. It was going to be a while.
He distracted himself with his phone for a while, but when that failed to entertain he pocketed his phone, crossed his arms, leaned back in his chair. He glowered at the fellow faceless people. Dozens—hundreds?—of anonymous stories, all walking around, all going about their daily lives.
Inevitably—it always ended up this way—he looked at his hand, turned his palms up so he could see. A pale white line streaked diagonally across his fingers, beginning at the tip of his index finger, and ending at the base of his pinky. The scar.
It was strange, to have a scar. It connected him, permanently, to a moment in time. The memory flashed in his mind, out of sequence. The dash to the kitchen. The weeks of healing. Grabbing the knife out of her hands. The dull, throbbing pain. Blood dripping on the floor. The pain of changing the bandages, tearing skin, opening the wound again.
He shook his head. He was waiting in a chair at the DMV. The scar was white—healed, but surely permanent. Crossing his fingers like memory crossed moments in time.
He stuffed his scarred hand in his pocket and looked around.
All of them had stories. He looked for signs.
Two rows away, another man sat down. He looked at his phone, he looked at his hands. He had one too.
A scar.
(250 words)
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Mandoline 1, Kim 0. Was using a brand new veggie slicer a few years ago. I had the guard thingy on, was being careful and I still sliced off the tip of my right thumb and fingernail.
I was lucky I didn't need stitches, but I've got a small white scar on my thumb.
Ohh I love this. The uncertainty and open ending for readers to continue the story in their own imagination!