Crunch: The Argument
Writing Exercise #9
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Crunch: The Argument
“You did what?”
“I sold it.”
“Just like that.”
“Yes.”
“Who told you you could sell it?”
“Uh, nobody. It’s mine. You gave it to me.”
“You ungrateful piece of—”
“I don’t understand why you are so mad.”
“That watch had been passed down for five generations.”
“Yeah annnnd I needed money, so I sold it.”
“How could you be so f---- dense?”
“It’s just a watch.”
“It’s just a watch. He means it. Just a watch. God in heaven. Just a watch—do you know the story behind the watch?”
“Yeah great-great-Grampa so-and-so saved up to buy it, there’s some life lesson involved, yadda yadda, passed it down—”
“It was loved and cherished by four generations before you. Does that mean nothing?”
“Uh…should it?”
“Do you know what the word empathy means?”
“Yeah, look, I’m sorry, ok? Rent was due. I didn’t want the watch. I didn’t need the watch. I needed money. I told you this. You know I have been struggling to get on my feet since I got home. Don’t get all high-and-mighty on me. Do you want me to be homeless, but know what time it is? How does that help anyone?”
“I’m trying here, ok? I really am. Every time I reach out I feel like you turn me back.”
“I don’t need you to reach out right now, don’t you understand? You’re not my biggest problem. Yes, Grampa’s watch, that’s nice, I appreciate it. I can’t afford food. Understand?”
(250 words )
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While I understand rent was due… I don’t think I would ever get behind selling an heirloom like that. Did he have nothing else to sell? Maybe get another job? Maybe I’m being too harsh? I’m horrified!
I really like the back and forth dialogue here. It packs an emotional punch 🤜
Is this the same watch from the other story about the heirloom they didnt want? Was that your take on that prompt?