Crunch: The Castle
Writing Exercise #2
This one is from allllll the way back in November after I declared I wouldn’t write in December, and inspired by a tiny castle in Texas shared by
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Crunch: Write about Newman’s Castle
“So, I’ll be honest with you,” The realtor shifted uncomfortably on her feet. “This next neighborhood is…an acquired taste. But it is in the area you’re looking, and the homes are cheaper.”
Clem stole a knowing glance at his wife, Tara. “Not going to give us the realtor spiel about it being a quaint neighborhood with a fun atmosphere?”
“Uh, there’s really no way to spin this. If I was the listing agent I might have a different spin for you, but as it is—seeing is believing.”
They drove 15 minutes to the neighborhood. It was a gated community—but the gate looked more like a drawbridge.
The homes were normal looking for the most part, and then—they saw it.
A CASTLE. And across the street, ANOTHER castle. There were little trebuchets and scorpions set up along the walls. The right-neighbor’s window had a rock lodged in the window.
They drove slowly past, staring as they went.
They followed the realtor past and through the neighborhood, wending their way to the home that’s for sale.
Clem turned to his wife, his wife turned to him.
Simultaneously, he said, “I love it,” and she said, “I hate it.”
The realtor eventually pulled into a driveway. Clem and Tara pulled in behind her, and got out to follow her into the house.
“How much for the Kings Castle?” Clem asked.
“If it was for sale I’d be able to tell you.”
“How big is this property?”
“NO.” Tara said, laughing.
(250 words )
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If money were no object, would you turn your property into a castle?
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My husband calls it stalking, but one of my favorite thing to do is get on Google Maps and poke around the UK for castles. Then I go read up on them in Wikipedia or their website. Castles have definitely been an inspiration in some of my stories that I've written.
This was a fun read! I did expect the castle to have more words dedicated to it than the couple and their dialogue...so I wished for more details there. Knowing the word limit, what you wrote was still impressive and I thank you for the fun read!