Crunch: The Reboot
Writing Exercise #28
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Crunch: Write about computer troubles
I waited till nightfall. It was dangerous in the fallen city during the day, too, but at night at least it was harder to be seen.
In the outskirts of town, I had been sifting through pre-collapse landfills. Cities back then used to produce mountains of trash, and societies back then liked to collect them in one place. I was looking for computer equipment—I was going to trade the computer to a collector in the city, for some food, maybe for a gun. My stomach rumbled. Focus.
The streets of the city were perfectly dark—only a few scattered lights hinted at the presence of people. A fire on the 12th story of a leaning tower; a flickering electric light kluged together by someone with enough know-how and probably armament to not be afraid.
I had my computer—or at least, my computer parts. I had met with the collector earlier in the day, to tell him I would be coming.
At last: “About time, feller. Come inside.”
I followed behind the strange man, and put my bag on the counter while he walked behind.
“Show me what ye got in that bag, there.”
I pulled out some junk parts, and then: the computer.
“Wow!” He plugged the computer in and pressed some buttons. Nothing happened.
“Uh, kid, you said you had a working computer.”
“It, uh, it does work.”
“This ain’t workin.”
“It’s got all the parts, though!”
“Maybe it does, it ain’t workin!”
“Did…did you try rebooting?”
(250 words)
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