Before The Maps Are Final - Mission 1
Can't wait for the rest of this story. I love settings like this.
Such a fun start! Excited to see how this progresses, Scoot! 👏
Oh good it ended happily, all is well, and I'm sure Terrence will retire safe and happy: why do I have a bad feeling about this?
I love all the character work in this. I want to know more about all of them! Excellent start!
"Jerrick" must be Theysian for "jerk."
I was worried that something was going to go horribly wrong, but I'm glad everyone was safe! I am taking notes, though. 😁
Bravo, Scoot! I'm fully into this and can't wait to see the next set of crew. You really pulled me right into this and made me curious about where we are going next!
Loving the format! I love a good SF story!
Ok, are we sure its Jerrick? And that his suit wasn’t compromised by the fall and and and??
Yeah, this seems suspiciously happy for a first chapter.
Nice. Looking forward to this
Can't wait for the rest of this story. I love settings like this.
Such a fun start! Excited to see how this progresses, Scoot! 👏
Oh good it ended happily, all is well, and I'm sure Terrence will retire safe and happy: why do I have a bad feeling about this?
I love all the character work in this. I want to know more about all of them! Excellent start!
"Jerrick" must be Theysian for "jerk."
I was worried that something was going to go horribly wrong, but I'm glad everyone was safe! I am taking notes, though. 😁
Bravo, Scoot! I'm fully into this and can't wait to see the next set of crew. You really pulled me right into this and made me curious about where we are going next!
Loving the format! I love a good SF story!
Ok, are we sure its Jerrick? And that his suit wasn’t compromised by the fall and and and??
Yeah, this seems suspiciously happy for a first chapter.
Nice. Looking forward to this