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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

Okay, this was COOL. Action packed, felt like I was right there, I mean I practically heard the clang of the droid falling off the ladder (which is kind of hilarious actually in retrospect: Boss Felton is intimidating, but his choice of ladder material was clearly poor).

And that image of Felton having a droid light a cigarette for him, oh that was brilliant. That's the kind of thing that sticks in your mind, like a Faun carrying parcels in a snowy wood, or the idea of cows on a spaceship cargo bay floor that reportedly inspired Firefly. That was good. Godfather-esque, if I may say.

The Casual Writer's avatar

And we're off running! Literally! I need to know all about the main character now. Can't wait to read more!

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Wow! My first Sandbox Earth story! Feels like there’s more to come?

Scoot's avatar

Not continuing this story, but i like Boss Felton so we will probably see him again. TBD! Thank you for reading!

Bridget Riley's avatar

Yay! I love hopeful stories!! Not gonna lie, Boss Felton looked like Daredevil’s Kingpin in my head.