Crunch: The Umbrella
Crunch: The Umbrella
Writing Exercise #19
Another visit to dip into my own well of prompts, but this time + weather because it was stormy here yesterday. Sorry I’m late!
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Crunch: Write about a dirt path (+ weather)
He used to carry an umbrella with him everywhere. Just the way of things. He was frightened—frightened—of the rain. Even cloudy days filled him with worry. His heart quickened, he began to sweat—will it or won’t it, he thought, as he went about his business. And, sure, more often than not he looked a little strange carrying an umbrella around on a sunny August afternoon. But those few times, those special times—he looked like a genius.
Today was different. He had been talking on the phone. He stepped out of his house. He got in his car. He drove to the little trail. He arrived, he hung up. He reached behind the passenger seat—no umbrella. Panic. The sky looked clear. Could he do it? I can do it, he thought. Just a short little jaunt. He stepped uneasily out of his car, and found the dirt path in the woods, and he began his walk.
The walk was a looping trail, and when as much trail lay ahead of him as behind him—he heard a terrible sound.
Thunder.
A summer storm was gathering, it would sweep in—he could see the dark clouds behind the trees. His heart pounded. His hands shook. He wasn’t going to make it.
The pitter patter of the first drops landed like a volley of arrows. Then, the deluge. Thunder pounded. Rain bombarded him. He was soaked head to toe.
He smiled. Oh, he thought, this isn’t so bad.
(250 words)
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This made me want to get out and go for a walk myself. Well done!
1. I have; I'm not overly keen on it. I don't usually carry an umbrella anymore because I don't really drive; I used to have a Star Wars umbrella with a lightsaber-style handle, but alas, that was lost some years ago. C'est la vie.
2. I did when I was driving. Now, not really. Mostly it's the car seat for the kiddo, lol.
3. I...don't know that I've ever thought about it! Whatever doesn't knock the power out, is my thought. :) I will say, I do really love a grey rainy day; I don't necessarily like being out *in* it, but if I don't have to go anywhere.... my wife is the same way.
High key love this! I’m a rainy day gal through and through, and I love seeing the look on the kids’ faces when they go out in the rain after a long dry stint.