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Skeptic Fail's avatar

Great action! And I love how Delacruz makes sense of it all, and how he was happy about the EMP! Ha! Also very cool to mention the dark forest paradox!

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Scoot's avatar

I dont know that he was happy but it did help him! Glad you are enjoying! We switch to a new pov next week!

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Claire Walster's avatar

This was an interesting little prequel series! Makes me curious to read more of this world for sure!

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Scoot's avatar

More to come! Ive got 10 episodes planned, so stay tuned! I am glad youve enjoyed it!

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Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

Yes, excellent action! Funny thing when I was reading about the one ship crumbling, a strange loud rumble ran through our house for some reason. I have no idea what it was. Great story though.

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Scoot's avatar

Better check there’s not a space laser in your attic! Thank you for reading, I think you’ll enjoy what’s coming up!

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Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

Lol I might have to do that.

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Walther Cantu's avatar

I enjoy the pace of the story very much. Well done, sir.

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Scoot's avatar

Thank you very much for reading!

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Keith Long's avatar

Whooaaa. The idea of two warring alien species fighting above our planet — a very visual and intense picture — is totally new to me. Such an amazing idea to utilize the Dark Forest concept like this, having us be unseen observers to it being enacted by two alien others. Brilliant.

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