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The Chronicler's avatar

Dastardly perfect cliffhanger and the snappy one-liners. I love it. Another amazing episode!

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The Chronicler's avatar

One more comment NOT dual posted to notes because I didn't want to spoil: DB's dying action!? Ty better fix our friend.

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

Jeez, now I'm anxious about the droid, the bike, the detective.... you're killin' me, Scoot!

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T. D. Wolf's avatar

If DB trusts Tyrone, then I trust Tyrone.

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Skeptic Fail's avatar

Yeah, James...just one more step forward into the light... you're bait, remember? ....(and then I can go home for dinner...)

Great setup!!! Love the dialogue and the characters here!!! Next installment PLEEEEAAASSSEEE

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Sara Dietz's avatar

This episode absolutely did get out of hand 😂 love it

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Derek Petty's avatar

Oh how the turn tables!

Scoot this is so much fun, and the dialogue is top notch! And great job setting the scene. I could feel the grime of that bar.

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Yeah!! DB saves the day! That was a great twist!

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Rocky Mattingly's avatar

Great writing. Thanks for sharing with us.

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