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I agree; a mysterious initiative definitely sounds ominous. I hope nothing happens to the waitress during the impending chaos, given that Bad Guys are almost certainly going to converge on the diner!

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I told you Uncle Gerard was sus!

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I like to imagine Scoot sitting at his desk in a smokey room, cigar in hand, whiskey within reach, typing all of this on an old typewriter. Classic. And loving this so far!

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Oops, DB. My funds...are, uh... frozen. Heh, heh. Looks like I can't pay you today.

Associate? Ha. Associate my rear-end chassis, James.

Next time I'll order you a coffee to make up for it, Dubby.

..."Hello, Gerard? It's me, DB431. Double agent much? Why yes..."

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Hmmm, the politicking! Shady, shady. 🥸

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Shady uncle is shady!

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Run, run, run. The evil uncle has had the police freeze funds.

Get to the safe house, fast as you can.

Great job on the suspense, @scoot.

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Oooh. Can’t wait for the next

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Hooked. Write quickly please!

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Enjoying this series so much!

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