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Stephanie Loomis's avatar

That slide off the bike. Ouch

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S.E. Reid's avatar

Phew, GREAT action sequence!! Very well paced!! 👏

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Jason Link's avatar

I'm having to catch my breath after reading this which means it was quite well written.

Substack's built-in "minutes to read" estimation did not take into account how exciting this would be.

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Skeptic Fail's avatar

So wait...Zaelland...is...gone? 🥺

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Jason Link's avatar

We haven’t seen a body...

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Skeptic Fail's avatar

My hope is restored!

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Sara Dietz's avatar

Dang scoot this was GOOD

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Phew, that was intense!! Great action. And Black Zaelland is more real and scary now we’ve met him up close and personal.

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Leslie A. Mills's avatar

Nice! But as usual, it ended too soon 😉

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NotaBot's avatar

Ooo the syringe really triggers the fear -glad he escaped that one.

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The Chronicler's avatar

Wow! This episode was so full of action, I couldn’t stop reading until the end!

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Excellent pacing, great action, and fabulous lighting.

This movie keeps getting better and better.

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T. D. Wolf's avatar

McElroy’s plan always seemed risky, but maybe it worked out? 😬

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