I like how you capture Tylus' reaction to being asked to fix a tractor. The cascading significance that is very realistic for a 13 year old. Fixing a tractor is not just fixing a tractor--it is the same stuff that killed the Jovian Union, and it will kill me, too! Love the world already!
Glad you like it! Hope you enjoy. I definitely have leveled up since writing this so i have to figure out how to revisit this series to tell the story i mean to tell!
I just gotta say that the fact that you found this made me EXTREMELY happy. It's such a deep cut. I keep seeing all the comments and thinking "THEY DON'T KNOW!"
I like how you capture Tylus' reaction to being asked to fix a tractor. The cascading significance that is very realistic for a 13 year old. Fixing a tractor is not just fixing a tractor--it is the same stuff that killed the Jovian Union, and it will kill me, too! Love the world already!
Glad you like it! Hope you enjoy. I definitely have leveled up since writing this so i have to figure out how to revisit this series to tell the story i mean to tell!
It's probably harder for the leveled up author to enjoy an oldie, but I am looking forward to reading the rest of the series! :)
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I just gotta say that the fact that you found this made me EXTREMELY happy. It's such a deep cut. I keep seeing all the comments and thinking "THEY DON'T KNOW!"
I didn't at first, but to quote Lieutenant Columbo, it bothered me, and I had to hunt it down. :)