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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

Niiiiiice. So many questions! Was the ghost talking to Jonah the whole time? Does Jonah have his own ghost? Does Jonah see dead people? Is he the only elder? Who're the kids?

This is a fascinating world and I would like more please. :)

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The Casual Writer's avatar

I can't wait to hear this story - whosever it is!

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Stephanie Loomis's avatar

Nice!! I forgot to do my flash fiction today. Tomorrow is another day

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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Oooh, great start! I hope it ends up being 3 parts because it's a delicious treat of a tale. I don't want it to end too soon, but love the pace of the unfolding so am sure you'll linger long enough for our ultimate storytelling pleasure. Looking forward to part two.

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Linda Cardillo's avatar

Love it. Waiting for more.....

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