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The Chronicler's avatar

This was an incredible read! I really loved the external angle through Tracy. And that ending? Speechless.

Will there be more?

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Scoot's avatar

I don't know! I don't have anything planned at present--I've resolved to read the rest of your series and maybe some others and get a feel for things. We'll see if the muse strikes again!

Really glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading!

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Damn, @scoot, For your first foray into the darkness, you did great.

You captured the mind of a serial killer, and now I'm wondering if he isn't the blackwater or if the blackwater lured him into killing others.

Once again, great job.

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Scoot's avatar

Thank you! I don't know whether to be proud or...disturbed...but anyway I am glad you enjoyed reading it!

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Skeptic Fail's avatar

Triggered beyond repair!!! Excellent work!

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Rachel LaDue's avatar

Great job with the creepy atmosphere and I second others’ feelings about your fine handling of some darkness. This was my first exposure to this collab project--I’m diving in with you!

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Stephanie Loomis's avatar

Well, that was disturbing

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Ken W.'s avatar

This getting a sequel or are we going to leave this on our minds making the greatest horror?

Either works very well.

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Scoot's avatar

No immediate plans for a sequel, but i reserve the right to obey the muse if she strikes!

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Zachary Roush's avatar

Wow. Explosive writing. Loved this!

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