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David Perlmutter's avatar

“Giiiirl!” In another words, my female superhero characters calling each other out. Or Leroy "Sugarfoot" Bonner of the Ohio Players trying to get his woman not to leave him. ("AWWWW, GARRRL!").

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Excellent! The buildup of tension going into the woods was very well done.

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Scoot's avatar

Thank you!!

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Keith Long's avatar

For someone who doesn’t write horror, you do it quite well. Good job

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Scoot's avatar

Wow, really appreciate this Keith! Thank you!

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

1. That made me scared reading it, so well done, you.

2. The Story of the Inexperienced Ghost, by H.G. Wells.

3. "The Lady or the Tiger?" by Frank Stockton. It's one of them, anyway. :)

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Walther Cantu's avatar

Do you know the American DJ that goes by the moniker "Girl Talk"? I think you should check him out.

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