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“Giiiirl!” In another words, my female superhero characters calling each other out. Or Leroy "Sugarfoot" Bonner of the Ohio Players trying to get his woman not to leave him. ("AWWWW, GARRRL!").

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Excellent! The buildup of tension going into the woods was very well done.

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Thank you!!

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For someone who doesn’t write horror, you do it quite well. Good job

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Wow, really appreciate this Keith! Thank you!

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1. That made me scared reading it, so well done, you.

2. The Story of the Inexperienced Ghost, by H.G. Wells.

3. "The Lady or the Tiger?" by Frank Stockton. It's one of them, anyway. :)

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Do you know the American DJ that goes by the moniker "Girl Talk"? I think you should check him out.

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